冲刺新高考英语书面表达20天集训Word版Day14习近平总书记一直提倡“厉行节约，反对浪费”的社会风尚，多次强调要制止餐饮浪费行为。请以此为题，写一封“节约粮食，反对浪费”的倡议书。要点如下：1.争做爱粮，节粮的倡导者。2.爱粮节粮的具体措施。注意：1.参考词汇：厉行节俭，反对浪费practicestricteconomyandcombatwaste2.字数：100词左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案解析】Onepossibleversion:Dearfriends,I’mheretocalloneveryonetopayattentiontothephenomenonoffoodwaste.AsPresidentXiadvocatesitissupposedtobeanewfashionforallChinesepeopletopracticestricteconomyandcombatwaste.Wemustbearitinmindthatfoodisapreciousresourceonourplanetandwastingfoodgoesagainstthebasicmoralprinciples.It’shightimethatwetookactionnow.Whenwehavedinneroutinarestaurant,pleaseremembertoorderappropriately,andtrytoeatup.It’srecommendedtopromotefoodsavingactionsonsocialmedia.Launchsomecampaignstoremindcustomersabouttheportionsizeofthedishes.So,don’thesitatetojoinus.Smallactionsmakeabigdifference.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封倡议书，提倡“厉行节约，反对浪费”的社会风尚。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.发出倡议的背景。2.发出倡议的原因。3.倡议的具体措施。4.发出倡议。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）callon.payattentionto.practicestricteconomyandcombatwaste.bearitinmind.goesagainst.It’shightimethat….tookaction.makeabigdifference.第三步：连词成句itissupposedtobeanewfashionforallChinesepeopletopracticestricteconomyandcombatwaste.Wemustbearitinmindthatfoodisapreciousresourceonourplanetandwastingfoodgoesagainstthebasicmoralprinciples.It’shightimethatwetookactionnow.Whenwehavedinneroutinarestaurant,pleaseremembertoorderappropriately,andtrytoeatup.It’srecommendedtopromotefoodsavingactionsonsocialmedia.Launchsomecampaignstoremindcustomersabouttheportionsizeofthedishes.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Wemustbearitinmindthatfoodisapreciousresourceonourplanetandwastingfoodgoesagainstthebasicmoralprinciples.这句话中it作形式宾语，thatfoodisapreciousresourceonourplanetandwastingfoodgoesagainstthebasicmoralprinciples.是真正的宾语。并使用了一些固定词组，如callon,payattentionto,practicestricteconomyandcombatwaste,bearitinmind等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。