冲刺新高考英语书面表达20天集训Word版Day5假定你是李华，你的美国网友Peter知道越来越多的人在学汉语，他也想学，但他不了解汉语学习的情况，请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.学习汉语的建议；2.你能提供的帮助。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案解析】DearPeter,I'mverygladtotalkaboutChinesewithyou.Asyouknow,moreandmorepeopleintheworldarelearningChineseandyouareinterestedinittoo.Inmyopinion,ifyouwanttolearnChinesewell,youwouldpracticemorespokenChineseeverydayjustlikeEnglish.AndyoucanalsowatchChinesemoviesandlistentoChinesesongs.Youmustkeepon,whichisimportantforsuccess.Besides,thebestwaytolearnChineseistocometoChina,andwecanchatinChinese,andsometimesinEnglish.I'mlookingforwardtoyourcomingtoChina.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给想学汉语但不了解汉语学习的情况的美国网友Peter，向他提供一些学习汉语的建议及你的帮助。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.学习汉语的建议；2.你能提供的帮助。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）begladtodosth.；beinterestedinsth.；listentosth.；keepon；lookforwardtosth.第三步：连词成句1.I'mverygladtotalkaboutChinesewithyou.2.moreandmorepeopleintheworldarelearningChinesesothatyouareinterestedinittoo.3.AndyoucanalsowatchChinesemoviesandlistentoChinesesongs.4.Youmustkeepon,5.I'mlookingforwardtoyourcomingtoChina.(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast,Lastbutnotleast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,also3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult5表换一种方式表达：Inotherwords,thatistosay6.表进行举例说明：Forexample;Forinstance;suchas+n/doing7.表陈述事实：Infact,franklyspeaking8.表选择：either…or…，or连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如Youmustkeepon,whichisimportantforsuccess.这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如beinterestedinsth.，keepon，lookforwardtosth.等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。