冲刺新高考英语书面表达20天集训Word版Day17假定你是李华，原定周六你要去拜访以前的班主任张老师，可是由于某种原因你不能前往了。请给他写一封电子邮件，向他说明取消此次拜访的情况，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.陈述原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.次数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.Zhang,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案解析】Possibleversion1:DearMr.Zhang,IamexcessivelysorryforbeingunabletovisityouthisSaturdayafternoonbecauseIwillbeattendingalectureaboutgarbageclassificationonbehalfofmyclassatthattime.SoimportantisthelecturethatIcan’taffordmyabsencefromit.Consequently,Ihavetocancelmyvisittoyou.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapology.IwillvisityouonSundaymorningifitisconvenienttoyou.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封取消拜访信。假定你是李华，原定周六你要去拜访以前的班主任张老师，可是由于某种原因你不能前往了，请写邮件说明取消此次拜访的情况。写作时首先进行道歉，再详细说明无法赴约的理由，最后提出另约时间。需侧重注意语气和词汇的选用。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分法要求：1.表示歉意2.陈述原因3.另约时间第二步：列提纲（重点词组）excessivelysorry；unabletovisit；attendingalecture；garbageclassification；onbehalfofsb；can'tafford；absence；Consequently；cancel；wouldappreciateitif；convenient第三步：连词成句1.Iamexcessivelysorryforbeingunabletovisityou.2.Iwillbeattendingalectureaboutgarbageclassificationonbehalfofmyclass.3.SoimportantisthelecturethatIcan’taffordmyabsencefromit.4.Ihavetocancelmyvisittoyou.5.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapology6.IwillvisityouonSundaymorningifitisconvenienttoyou.第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition;including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Ontheonehand…4.表因果关系：Consequently,Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰第五步：润色修改。【点睛】文章条理清晰，理由描述恰当，态度诚恳，行文流畅。准确地使用了较多高级句式，如：IamexcessivelysorryforbeingunabletovisityouthisSaturdayafternoonbecauseIwillbeattendingalectureaboutgarbageclassificationonbehalfofmyclassatthattime.这句使用了because引导原因状语从句；SoimportantisthelecturethatIcan'taffordmyabsencefromit.这句使用了so…that(太……以至于)的倒装句式引导结果状语从句；以及IwillvisityouonSundaymorningifitisconvenienttoyou.这句使用if引导条件状语从句。同时运用高档词汇，例如excessivelysorry；garbageclassification；onbehalfofsb；can’tafford；absence；Consequently；convenient等。范文内容符合题目要求，原因合理，运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范，是一篇值得参考的作文。