冲刺新高考英语书面表达20天集训Word版Day6假定你是李华,从网上得知你市将举办国际智能机器人展览且正在招募志愿者。请你用英文写一份申请信,内容包括:1.表明写信目的及自我介绍;2.简述个人优势;3.希望获准。注意:1.词数100。左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案解析】DearSir/Madam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudent.TheotherdayIhappenedtoknowfromtheInternetthatanintelligentrobotexhibitionwillbeheldinourcityandsomevolunteersareneeded.I'mquiteinterestedinitandwritingtoapplyforit.Asateenager,Iamoutgoing,energetic,andresponsible.NotonlydoIhavegreatinterestinrobots,butalsoIhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIcancommunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.What'smore,Ihavehadsomesimilarworkingexperiencesbefore.IdohopethatIcanbeavolunteerinyourexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封申请信,申请做一名城市举办的国际智能机器人展览的志愿者。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时,少量现在完成时。结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1.表明写信目的及自我介绍;2.简述个人优势;3.希望获准。第二步:列提纲(重点词组)amiddleschoolstudent;fromtheInternet;anintelligentrobotexhibition;needsomevolunteersbeinterestedinit;applyforit;outgoing,energetic,andresponsible;haveagoodcommandofEnglish;communicatewithothersinEnglishfluently;workingexperiences;avolunteerinyourexhibition;lookforwardto第三步:连词成句1.I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudent.2.TheotherdayIhappenedtoknowfromtheInternetthatanintelligentrobotexhibitionwillbeheldinourcityandsomevolunteersareneeded.3.I'mquiteinterestedinitandwritingtoapplyforit.4.Asateenager,Iamoutgoing,energetic,andresponsible.5.NotonlydoIhavegreatinterestinrobots,butalsoIhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIcancommunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.6.What'smore,Ihavehadsomesimilarworkingexperiencesbefore.7.IdohopethatIcanbeavolunteerinyourexhibition.8.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)如:表并列补充关系:Whatismore,notonly…but(also)连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,【点睛】[高分句型1]TheotherdayIhappenedtoknowfromtheInternetthatanintelligentrobotexhibitionwillbeheldinourcityandsomevolunteersareneeded.(宾语从句以及一般将来时被动语态)[高分句型2]NotonlydoIhavegreatinterestinrobots,butalsoIhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIcancommunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.(倒装句的运用)[高分句型3]What'smore,Ihavehadsomesimilarworkingexperiencesbefore.(衔接词文章纽带以及现在完成时)