冲刺新高考英语书面表达20天集训Word版Day12假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你寒假在家每天通过网络课程进行学习，对此很感兴趣．请给他写一封邮件介绍相关情况，内容包括：1.通过网络进行授课的原因；2.网络课程的授课方式和内容；3.你对网络课程的感受．注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案解析】DearPeter，It'snicetohearfromyou!Iamoccupiedintakingonlinecoursesthesedaysasaresultoftheoutbreakofthecovid﹣19virus．Itisachallengeforusstudentsaswellasteachers．Inourschool，teachersaregivingonlinelessonswiththehelpofanappDingDing．Itissoconvenientthatwecanattendclassesanywherethroughacellphoneoracomputer．Asforme，theonlineteachingmethodcannotonlyensurethesafetyofteachersandstudents，butalsofurtherarousethestudents'interestinlearning，whichinreturnwillimprovetheefficiencyoflearning．Ihopeeverythinggoeswellwithyourstudy．Lookingforwardtoyourreply．Yours，LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回复询问信，介绍利用网络课程进行学习相关情况。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表达感谢2.相关介绍情况1）通过网络进行授课的原因；2）网络课程的授课方式和内容；3)你对网络课程的感受．第二步:列提纲（重点词组）hearfrom.takingonlinecourses.asaresultof.withthehelpof.notonly…butalso….inreturn.lookforwardto第三步：连词成句1.It’snicetohearfromyou!2.Iamoccupiedintakingonlinecoursesthesedaysasaresultoftheoutbreakofthecovid﹣19virus.3.Itissoconvenientthatwecanattendclassesanywherethroughacellphoneoracomputer．4.theonlineteachingmethodcannotonlyensurethesafetyofteachersandstudents，butalsofurtherarousethestudents'interestinlearning，whichinreturnwillimprovetheefficiencyoflearning．根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast.2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including.3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult.连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Asforme，theonlineteachingmethodcannotonlyensurethesafetyofteachersandstudents，butalsofurtherarousethestudents'interestinlearning,whichinreturnwillimprovetheefficiencyoflearning.关系词which引导非限制性定语从句。so...that引导的结果状语从句Itissoconvenientthatwecanattendclassesanywherethroughacellphoneoracomputer．全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。