一、结构篇1、开头Sampleone(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一,agreeordisagree,除了个别);Oncontemporarysociety(一般的背景)/Withtheadventofthetechnologicallyadvancedsociety(theinformationexplosiveera(与科技有关的背景),XX(中心词)servesasacatalystforourfuturesuccess/XXissynonymouswithknowledgeandtheroadtosuccess/XXplaysanessential/increasinglyimportantrolein…/XXisenjoyinganincreasinglyhighpopularityamongpeople./很简单的一句背景,However,people(universities,government,citizen,society,government,)are/isinvariablyfacedwithsuchaquestion/can’thelpwondering:改写题目1.Confucian(YuQiuyu,MarkTwain,WilliamShakespeare),(oneof)thegreatestandmostinfluentialChinesephilosophers(scholars,educators,writers,thinkers,statesmen),hasinsightfullycommented,“___编____”Iclingtoanunshakeablebeliefthathiscommentgivestheanswertothisquestion:改写题目2.Amongcountlessfactorswhichcontributetomypositionarefollowingconspicuousones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要).要做的:想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目Sampletwo:(如果sampleone的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisuretime,就用下面的)Oncontemporarysociety(一般的背景)/Withtheadventofthetechnologicallyadvancedsociety(theinformationexplosiveera(与科技有关的背景))/Onaccountof…,XX(中心词)servesasacatalystforourfuturesuccess/XXissynonymouswithknowledgeandtheroadtosuccess/XXplaysanessential/increasinglyimportantrolein…/XXisenjoyinganincreasinglyhighpopularityamongpeople./很简单的一句背景(如so…that…/notonly…butalso).However,whenitcomestothechoicebetweenAAandBB/Whenaskedaboutwhether改写题目1,peoplegetintoadilemma.Accordingtomypersonalityandexperiences/AsfarasIamconcerned/Frommyperspective,Iclingtoanunshakeablebeliefthat改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写:Amongcountlessfactorswhichcontributetomypositionarefollowingconspicuousones(最后一定排比结尾)/AAnotonly…butalso(2)/TherearevariousmeritsAAbringsabout,firstofall,to…;secondly,to…;andlastly…(3).要做的:想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)2、分点一:分层论证Basictoanyunderstandingofthebenefitswecangetfrom_______isthat__________/Firstandforemost,Ononehand_________,Ontheotherhand_________Besides/What’smore/Inaddition.这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节,重点是要用一些精华句子!3、分点二:举例论证Furtherlendingcredencetomypositionisthat____________(简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthantheexampleof(典型例子)/Acaseinpointisthat(不是很典型)________,…..(例子见后面)一句话总结例子:Asaresult,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样4、让步段:Agreeordisagree:Admittedly,_____,tosomeextent,maydirectlyorindirectly____/hasitsundeniabledetriments.Forinstance,_______However,thevaluablemeritsof_______considerablyovershadowthedrawbacks/onnoaccount________./二选一:Admittedly,BBalsohascertainmeritswhichdeservesomewordshere.Forexample,____(字数不够就多讲点)However,BB的缺点或AA也可以做到.ComparedwithAA,(which可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面,)itpales.5、结尾段:Therefore,duetotheabovementionedreasons,whichsometimescorrelatewitheachothertoformanorganicwholeandthusbecomemorepersuasivethananysingleoneofthem(字不够了用),Ireinforcemystandpointthat改写题目3Onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)___canwe__________;onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)___canwe________;andonlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)___c...