冲刺新高考英语书面表达20天集训Word版Day7假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1.过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受和认识；3.将来的目标及措施。参考词汇：责任responsibility注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）Goodmorning，everyone！Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“thoughtsonbecomingagrown-up”.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforlistening.【答案解析】Onepossibleversion：Goodmorning，everyone！Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“thoughtsonbecomingagrown-up”.Asachild,IalwayshopedthatIcouldgrowupassoonaspossiblesothatIcouldhavewhateverIwantedanddowhateverIliked.NowI’magrown-up,butIfindthingsdonotgoasIexpected.AlthoughIcanenjoymorefreedom,atthesametimeIrealizethatbeingagrown-upnotonlymeansthis，butalsomoreresponsibilities.Ihopetodomoreformyparentsandsocietyinthefuturetomakemylifemoremeaningful.Toreachthegoal,Imustfirsttrymybesttopassthecollegeentranceexaminationandenteragooduniversity.Thankyouforlistening.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写英文发言稿。【详解】第一步：审题。体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。要点：1.过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受和认识；3.将来的目标及措施。第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）如：growup，assoonaspossible，atthesametime，freedom，responsibility，meaningful，tryone’sbest等。第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…,Finally,Intheend,Atlast;2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also);3.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。第五步：润色修改。【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了主从复合句，如Asachild,IalwayshopedthatIcouldgrowupassoonaspossiblesothatIcouldhavewhateverIwantedanddowhateverIliked.使用了状语从句和宾语从句，Toreachthegoal,Imustfirsttrymybesttopassthecollegeentranceexaminationandenteragooduniversity.使用了不定式，主从复合句的使用，使得文章的句式灵活多变，为文章增加了色彩。