答案提供详尽解析，旨在指导考生拓展写作思路，提升写作能力。概要写作专练(一)A(2018·浙江省名校联盟第三次联考)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Someyearsago,writinginmydiaryusedtobeausualactivity.Iwouldreturnfromschoolandspendtheexpectedhalfhourrecordingtheday’sevents,feelings,andimpressionsinmylittlebluediary.Ididnotreallyneedtoexpressmyemotionsbywayofwords,butIgainedacertainsatisfactionfromseeingmyexperiencesforeverrecordedonpaper.Afterall,isn’taccumulatingmemoriesawayofpreservingthepast?WhenIwasthirteenyearsold,Iwentonalongjourneyonfootinagreatvalley,well-equippedwithpens,adiary,andacamera.Duringthetrip,Iwasbusyrecordingeveryincident,nameandplaceIcameacross.Ifeltproudtobespendingmytimeproductively,dutifullypreservingforfuturegenerationsadetaileddescriptionofmytravels.Onmylastnightthere,Iwanderedoutofmytent,diaryinhand.Theskywasclearandlitbytheglareofthemoon,andthewallsofthevalleylookedthreateningbehindtheirscreenofshadows.Iautomaticallytookoutmypen...Atthatpoint,IunderstoodthatnothingIwrotecouldevermatchorreplacethefewsecondsIallowedmyselftoexperiencethedramaticbeautyofthevalley.AllIrememberedofthepreviousfewdayswerethedullcharacterizationsIhadsetdowninmydiary.Now,IonlywriteinmydiarywhenIneedtowritedownaspecialthoughtorfeeling.Istilllovetorecordideasandquotationsthatstrikemeinbooks,orobservationsthatareparticularlymeaningful.Itakepictures,butnotveryoften—onlyofobjectsIfindreallybeautiful.I’mnolongerblindlysatisfiedwithhavingsomethingtorememberwhenIgrowold.IrealizethatlifewillsimplypassmebyifIstaybehindthecamera,busypreservingthepresentsoastoliveitinthefuture.Idon’twanttowakeuponedayandhavenothingbutapileofpicturesandnotes.MaybeIwon’thaveasmanyexactrepresentationsofpeopleandplaces;maybeI’llforgetcertainfacts,butatleasttheexperienceswillalwaysremaininsideme.Idon’tlivetomakememories—Ijustlive,andthememoriesformthemselves.一、试题详解1．核心内容本文是一篇记叙文，全文共四段。第一段讲述作者小时候喜欢写日记，每天忙着把各种日常生活及感受记录在本子上，积累记忆，保存过去。第二段讲述作者13岁时的一次旅游经历，山谷的美丽使她/他意识到，应该学会当时当地去欣赏和体验世间万物，而不是一味地记录。第三段主要讲述了作者写日记的方式发生了改变，现在只把自己特殊的想法或情感有选择地写在日记中。第四段是作者对生活的感悟：把握现在，感受今天；生活，重在感受而不是为了回忆而记忆。2．写作思路(1)理清文章脉络，概括段落大意。该文第一段围绕着首句“Someyearsago,writinginmydiaryusedtobeausualactivity.”讲述几年前，作者每天忙于记录日常生活感受，事无巨细等。第二段讲述作者在写日记一事上的转变，全段没有主题句，因此可围绕change一词将本段大意概括为“Theauthor’sattitudetowardsthediarychangedafteratriptoavalley.”。第三段围绕首句“Now,IonlywriteinmydiarywhenIneedtowritedownaspecialthoughtorfeeling.”详细讲述作者改变写日记方式后的相关情况，她/他开始有选择地在日记中记录自己的感想体会。第四段是作者的感悟，即“Idon’tlivetomakememories—Ijustlive,andthememoriesformthemselves.”。(2)确定表达要点，灵活准确表达。要点1是对第一段内容的归纳，同时为使句意更加完整清晰，可适当补充细节，例如，写日记是为了储存记忆。要点2是对第二段内容的概括，即作者写日记方式变化前后的对比。要点3承接着要点2，是对作者改变写日记方式后的具体描述，可以使用thus衔接。要点4是最后一段中作者的感悟。二、参考范文Theauthorhadmadeitaroutinetokeepadetaileddiaryofher/hiseverydaylifetostorememories.(要点1)Thatchangedafteratriptoavalley,whe...