肖申克的救赎（剧本）译/王小瑞jroclee@1631INT--CABIN--NIGHT(1946)内景--小屋--夜晚Adark,emptyroom.一所黑黑的、空洞的房子Thedoorburstsopen.AMANandWOMANenter,drunkandgiggling,hornyashell.Nosooneristhedoorshutthanthey'reallovereachother,rippingatclothes,pawingatflesh,mouthslockedtogether.门突然被撞开，一个男人和一个女人醉意地走了进来，吃吃地笑着，很是暧昧。不等门关上，他们就缠在了一块，互相撕扯着衣服，搓摸着对方的身体，两张嘴紧紧地贴在了一起。Hegropesforalamp,triestoturniton,knocksitoverinstead.Hellwithit.He'sgotmoreurgentthingstodo,likegettingherblouseopenandhishandsonherbreasts.Shearches,moaning,fumblingwithhisfly.Heslamsheragainstthewall,rippingherskirt.Wehearfabrictear.男人摸索着想打开台灯，却弄翻了它。顾不上管台灯，他有更急的事要做，他掀起她的上衣，用手按住她的乳房。她仰着身子，呻吟着，慌乱地解着他的钮扣。他猛地将她顶在墙上，撕扯她的裙子。可以听到织物被撕破的声音。Heentersherrightthenandthere,roughly,upagainstthewall.Shecriesout,hittingherheadagainstthewallbutnotcaring,grindingagainsthim,clawinghisback,shiveringwiththesensationsrunningthroughher.Hecarriesheracrosstheroomwithherlegswrappedaroundhim.Theyfallontothebed.他粗鲁的进入了她，顶着墙壁。她大声叫着，扭曲着身体迎合他，抓着他的后背，随着插入的感觉颤僳，毫不在意她的头抵着墙壁。他抱着她穿过屋子，她的双腿则夹着他，两人跌倒在床上。CAMERAPULLSBACK,exitingthroughthewindow,travelingsmoothlyoutside...镜头向后拉，退出窗户，平滑地向外伸展……2EXT--CABIN--NIGHT(1946)2外景--小屋--夜晚...torevealthebungalow,remoteinawoodedarea,thelovers'criesspillingintothenight...偏僻的小树林中展现出那间小屋，那对情人的叫声涌进黑夜……...andwedriftdownawoodedpath,thesoundsofruttingpassiongrowingfainter,minglingnowwiththenightsoundsofcricketsandhootowls...沿着林间小路，情欲之音逐渐减弱，与蟋蟀和猫头鹰的叫声混在一起……...andwebegintohearFAINTMUSICinthewoods,tinnyandincongruous,andstillwekeepPULLINGBACKuntil...隐隐的音乐在树林中响起，既微弱又不协调，镜头继续后拉直到……...acarisrevealed.A1946Plymouth.Parkedinaclearing.一辆轿车显现出来。是辆1946年的普利茅斯。泊在林中的一块空地上。3INT--PLYMOUTH--NIGHT(1946)3内景--普利茅斯--夜晚ANDYDUFRESNE,mid-20's,wirerimglasses,three-piecesuit.Undernormalcircumstancesarespectable,solidcitizen;hardlydangerous,perhapsevenmeek.Butthesecircumstancesarefarfromnormal.Heisdisheveled,unshaven,andverydrunk.Acigarettesmoldersinhismouth.Hiseyes,flintyandhard,arerivetedtothebungalowupthepath.安迪·杜弗兰，二十五、六岁，金边眼镜，西装革履。正常情况下会是一位体面的、可靠的公民；没有危险，甚至还有些温顺。但现在的情况却很不正常。他头发凌乱、胡子未刮，醉意醺醺，嘴里还怄着雪茄。眼神又直又僵，死盯着小径前方的那间小屋。Hecanhearthemfuckingfromhere.他听得到他们在做爱。Heraisesabottleofbourbonandknocksitback.Theradioplayssoftly,painfullyromantic,tauntinghim:他举起一瓶波旁威士忌，大口大口的喝。无线电里那绵绵的，令人心烦的浪漫小调，嘲弄着他。Yousteppedoutofadream...Youaretoowonderful...Tobewhatyouseem...你走出梦境……你如此精彩……你仿佛……Heopenstheglovecompartment,pullsoutanobjectwrappedinarag.Helaysitinhislapandunwrapsitcarefully--他打开仪表板那儿的杂物柜，拉出一件破布包着的东西。他把它放在腿上，小心的打开----revealinga.38revolver.Oily,black,evil.一支点38左轮，油油的，黑色，不祥之兆。Hegrabsaboxofbullets.Spillsthemeverywhere,allovertheseatsandfloor.Clumsy.Hepicksbulletsoffhislap,loadingthemintothegun,onebyone,methodicalandgrim.Sixi...