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小作文题目:Thepiechartbelowshowsthemainreasonswhyagriculturallandbecomeslessproductive.Thetableshowshowthesecausesaffectedthreeregionsoftheworldduringthe1990s.范文:Thepiechartandtableshowhowlandaroundtheworldwasdegradedduringthe1990s–theformeronaworldwidescaleandthelatterinthreedifferentregions.Worldwide,over-grazingwasthebiggestcauseoflanddegradation(35%),withdeforestationcausing30%andover-cultivationcausingslightlyless(28%).Otherfactorscaused7%oflanddegradation.Thetableshowsthat,duringthe1990s,23%ofthelandinEuropewasdegraded,morethaninOceania(13%)andfarmorethaninNorthAmerica(5%).InOceania,over-grazingwasprimarilyresponsibleforlanddegradation,withdeforestationaccountingforfarlessandnonecausedthroughover-cultivation.InNorthAmerica,over-cultivationwasthemainreason,withaboutathirdoflanddegradationbeingcausedbyover-grazingandverylittlebeingcausedbydeforestation.InEurope,deforestationwasresponsibleforabout40%ofthelanddegradation,over-cultivationabout30%andover-grazingabout20%.Tosummarise,landdegradationwasduetothreemainfactorsandthesefactorsdifferedinproportionindifferentregions.大作文题目:Somepeoplebelieveparentsshouldteachtheirchildrentobegoodmembersofsociety,butIandothersthinkschoolisthemainplaceforthistobetaught.参考范文1——建议是学校Somepeoplebelieveparentsshouldteachtheirchildrentobegoodmembersofsociety,butIandothersthinkschoolisthemainplaceforthistobetaught.ThemainreasonwhyIthinkschoolsshouldprimarilyberesponsibleforteachingchildrentobegoodmembersofsocietyisthatchildrenspendmoretimeatschoolwithteachersthanwiththeirparents.Thechildrenarealsoinaformallearningenvironment.Thiscombinationprovidesmoreopportunitiesforteacherstoshowchildrenhowtobehaveasgoodmembersofsociety.Theteacherscanalsoensurethatallthechildrenhavethesamechancetolearnthesamethingsaboutbeinggoodmembersofsociety.Ifparentsaremademoreresponsibleforteachingtheirchildrentobegoodmembersofsociety,thenmanyparentsmightfindtheydonothavethetimeforthis.Parentshavemanyresponsibilitiessuchasworkandtakingcareofthehome.Ofcourse,manyparentswillnaturallyprefertodootherthingswiththeirchildren,suchashavingfunandvisitingplacesofinterest.Inaddition,someparentsmightnotbeasexperiencedasteachersatteachingchildren,sothechildrenmightnotlearnaswellasatschool.Therewillalwaysbeplentyofparentswhohavethetime,willingnessandabilitytoteachtheirchildrentobegoodmembersofsociety.However,manymorewillfinditdifficultandneedextrahelp.Somewillaskotherparentsorconsultbooksorwebsites.Idonotthinkthereisanythingwrongwiththis,butweshouldnotassumethatallparentswilldoit.Insummary,Ithinkparentswilloftenteachtheirchildrentobegoodmembersofsociety,butthisshouldmainlybedoneatschools.参考范文2——建议是父母Ithinkthatthemainresponsibilityforteachingchildrentobegoodmembersofsocietylieswithparentsratherthanschoolsandshalloutlinemyreasonsinthisessay.Ithinkthatmostparentsknowtheirchildrenwellenoughtobeabletoteachthemtobegoodmembersofsociety.Atschool,childrenareofteninlargeclassesandthereforedonotreceivesomuchindividualattention.Whenteachingchildrentobegoodmembersofsociety,Ithinkthatthisindividualattentionisimportant,becausesomewillhavelearntaboutmembershipofsocietyandothersnot.Theparentswillgenerallyknowthisandbeabletofillanymissinggapsintheirchild’sknowledge.Secondly,parentsandtheirchildrenwillprobablyspendmoretimetogetherinavarietyofsocialsituations,whereasteachersandtheirstudentsspendmostoftheirtimetogetherintheclassroom.Thevarietyofsocialsituationsgivestheparentsmoreteachingopportunities,forexamplewhileshopping,atpubliceventsandatfamilygatherings.Ofcourse,theseopportunitiesgivechildrenthechancetolearntobegoodmembersofsocietyfromotheradults,notonlyfromtheirparents.Thirdly,Ibelievethatschoolsandteachersshouldfocusonacademicsubjects.Thereisoftenlittleenoughtimefortheseatschools,somakingparentsresponsiblefornon-academicthings,suchasteachingchildrentobecomegoodmembersofsocietyisagoodidea.However,therewillbeopportunitiesforteacherstopointoutinclasshowchildrencanbegoodmembersofsociety,forexamplewhenteachingchildrenabouttheenvironment.Toconclude,Ithinkthereareclearadvantagesinhavingbothparentsandschoolsteachchildrenhowtobegoodmembersofsociety,butparentsshouldtakemostoftheresponsibility.

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