2021年高考英语培优计划之思维型课堂11读后续写拓展思维之烘托情节特征?【思维路径】运用侧面描写,可以对人物进行多角度映照和多层次烘托,人物的描写就会达到“横看成岭侧成峰”的丰富境界。?侧面描写有“以旁面写正面”、“以对面写正面”、“以反面写正面”三种方法。如果从一个侧面去描写,人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写,人物形象就容易丰满。在写作中,我们可以尝试以下几种侧面烘托法:景物烘托法——通过对自然景物的描绘,来烘托人物心情;他人反映法——听听他人的反映,去了解主人公的个性特征;借人写人法——通过对受影响者的刻画,间接地表现主人公的思想品质。一、场景拓展思维1:选择关键词1.关键词语blow吹howl咆哮crash碰撞stir搅动darken使变黑envelope信封,包裹gloomy阴郁的dip蘸pour泼sunshinesunlight阳光breeze微风dim昏暗的faint微弱的winding蜿蜒的frighten是某人害怕chilling寒冷的thunder雷,打雷lightening闪电frosty寒冷的melt融化2.常用短语bebathedin沐浴在amber-likesunshine琥珀色的阳光stretchoff延伸凉爽清新的风coolandrefreshingbreeze落日thesettingsunstrolldownthestreet在街上漫步thefirstrayofsunlight第一缕阳光floodinto涌入gentlebreeze微风多雨的季节arainyseason暴风雨之夜astormynight在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain在春天温暖的阳光里inthewarmspringsunshine难以忍受的热unbearablehot放晴了clearup木日光浴batheinthesunshine一个偏僻的小村庄asmallvillageoffthemap离海滨仅咫尺之遥bedottedwith点缀着二.场景拓展思维2:景色特征烘托人物心情(一)阳光明媚的景色烘托生命美好与心情的愉悦【典例赏析】Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingtonothingness(虚无),onlytore-emerge(重新出现)againonyourleft.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山,温和的光线落在肩头。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗,碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条,就像那卷起的窗帘。Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled(撒、点缀)theslope.风,轻柔而清冷,轻点这树枝,搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.(二)暴风骤雨的场景烘托心情的抑郁【典例赏析】Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,(乌云密布、黑云压顶)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(苍白昏暗的月亮).Thefrostyair(寒冷的空气)blewin,cuttinglikeknife.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。Stung的原形为sting“叮咬”Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.叹息的声音Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来...