精品word可编辑资料-------------原先读后续写是这么出炉的，太具体了！（具体步骤+范文）阅读下面短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事；TheSea’sSurpriseJimandAndywalkedalongthebeach,lookingforanadventure.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaythoughwasdifferent.Theboysfeltexcited.Seacrabsscamperedontherocks.Uponesideanddowntheother.Theywerequickandlively.Thetidedidn’tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenJimsawafish.Itwasstrandedonthebeach,justfloppingaround.“Canittalk.”Andyasked.“Itlookslikeanyotherfish,”Jimsaid.Hepickeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.“Doyouthinkitwillgrantusanywishes.”Andylaughed.Theboyswatchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthewater.“No.Maybenexttime.”Jimgrinned.Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameuponabottle.Itwasgreenwithacorkinthemouth.“Ourluckwillchange.Doesithaveamapinsideoragenie.”jokedAnAndyreacheddownandpickedupthebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.第1页，共5页---本文来源于网络，仅供参考，勿照抄，如有侵权请联系删除----------------本文来源于网络，仅供参考，勿照抄，如有侵权请联系删除---精品word可编辑资料-------------“Trythecorkagain.Ibetthegenieiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Orwe’llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,”Jimexclaimed.Andytuggedagainonthecork.Hewiggleditbackandforth.Hetwisteditaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Andyshookthebottle.Nothingcameout.Lookinginsidehecouldnanything’.Jtimseleookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.“It’sjustanoldwinebottle,compla”inedJ.imHegrabbedthebottleandtosseditbackontothesand.留意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语；Para.1:Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces...Para.2:Twoboysranafterit....第一步：第一次阅读猎取基本信息1.归纳基本信息第2页，共5页-------------本文来源于网络，仅供参考，勿照抄，如有侵权请联系删除---精品word可编辑资料-------------2.理清故事情节Jim和Andy想在海边寻宝→挽救了一条搁浅的鱼→遇到了一个瓶子→？？？Beginning:JimandAndywalkedalongthebeach,lookingfortreasure.→Jisawastrandedfishonthebeach.→Jimpickedthefishgentlyandcarrieditintothewater.→Theywalkedfartherdownthebeachandcameuponabottle.→Andyreacheddownandpickedupthebottle.→Herubbedthebottle,pulledonthecorkandshookthebottle.Nothinghappened.→Jimgrabbedthebottleandtosseditbackontothesand.→Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.→Climax:.→Twoboysranafterit.→Ending:..其次步：其次次阅读猎取情节进展线索1.梳理续写规律：细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落间的规律关系Para.1:Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.Whatwasinthebrokenbottle./WhatdidJimandAndydo./Whathappenedtothebrokenbottle.Para.2：Twoboysranafterit.Whydidtheboysrunafterit./Whatdidtheyfindlater./WherewasthestrandedfishsavedbyJim.2.归纳总结关键词：环绕划定的10个关键词，合理创新故事情节feltexcited,stranded—感受与状态silver—颜色treasure,bottle—重要事物pickedup,waitingfor,shookthebottle,complained—动作第3页，共5页---本文来源于网络，仅供参考，勿照抄，如有侵权请联系删除----------------本文来源于网络，仅供参考，勿照抄，如有侵权请联系删除---精品word可编辑资料-------------backandfort...