雅各布作文评分量表(Jacobsetal.1981)DescriptorsScoreLevelCriteriaKnowledgeableSubstantiveThoroughdevelopmentofthesisRelevanttoassignedtopicCONTENT30-27Excellenttoverygood:knowledgeable*substantive*thoroughdevelopmentofthesis*relevanttoassignedtopic26-22Goodtoaverage:someknowledgeofsubject*adequaterange*limiteddevelopmentofthesis*mostlyrelevanttotopic,butlacksdetail21-17Fairtopoor:limitedknowledgeofsubject*littlesubstance*inadequatedevelopmentoftopic16-13Verypoor:doesnotshowknowledgeofsubject*non-substantive*notpertinent*ORnotenoughtoevaluateFluentexpressionIdeasclearlystated/supportedSuccinctWell-organizedLogicalsequencingCohesiveORGANIZATION20-18Excellenttoverygood:fluentexpression*ideasclearlystated/supported*succinct*well-organized*logicalsequencing*cohesive17-14Goodtoaverage:somewhatchoppy*looselyorganizedbutmainideasstandout*limitedsupport*logicalbutincompletesequencing13-10Fairtopoor:nonfluent*ideasconfusedordisconnected*lackslogicalsequencinganddevelopment9-7Verypoor:doesnotcommunicate*noorganization*ORnotenoughtoevaluateSophisticatedrangeEffectiveword/idiomchoiceandusageWordformmasteryAppropriateregisterVOCABULARY20-18Excellenttoverygood:sophisticatedrange*effectiveword/idiomchoiceandusage*wordformmastery*appropriateregister17-14Goodtoaverage:adequaterange*occasionalerrorsofword/idiomform,choice,usagebutmeaningnotobscured13-10Fairtopoor:limitedrange*frequenterrorsofword/idiomform,choice,usage*meaningconfusedorobscured9-7Verypoor:essentiallytranslation*littleknowledgeofEnglishvocabulary,idioms,wordform*ORnotenoughtoevaluateEffectivecomplexconstructionsAgreementTenseNumberWordorder/functionUSE25-22Excellenttoverygood:effectivecomplexconstructions*fewerrorsofagreement,tense,number,wordorder/function,s,pronouns,prepositions21-18Goodtoaverage:effectivebutsimpleconstructions*minorproblemsincomplexconstructions*severalerrorsofagreement,tense,number,wordorder/function,s,pronouns,prepositionsbutmeaningseldomobscuredLANGUA17-11Fairtopoor:majorproblemsinsimple/complexconstructions*frequenterrorsofnegation,agreement,tense,number,wordorder/function,s,pronouns,prepositionsand/orfragments,run-ons,deletions*meaningconfusedorobscuredDescriptorsScoreLevelCriteriaKnowledgeableSubstantiveThoroughdevelopmentofthesisRelevanttoassignedtopicCONTENT30-27Excellenttoverygood:knowledgeable*substantive*thoroughdevelopmentofthesis*relevanttoassignedtopic26-22Goodtoaverage:someknowledgeofsubject*adequaterange*limiteddevelopmentofthesis*mostlyrelevanttotopic,butlacksdetail21-17Fairtopoor:limitedknowledgeofsubject*littlesubstance*inadequatedevelopmentoftopic16-13Verypoor:doesnotshowknowledgeofsubject*non-substantive*notpertinent*ORnotenoughtoevaluateFluentexpressionIdeasclearlystated/supportedSuccinctWell-organizedLogicalsequencingCohesiveORGANIZATION20-18Excellenttoverygood:fluentexpression*ideasclearlystated/supported*succinct*well-organized*logicalsequencing*cohesive17-14Goodtoaverage:somewhatchoppy*looselyorganizedbutmainideasstandout*limitedsupport*logicalbutincompletesequencing13-10Fairtopoor:nonfluent*ideasconfusedordisconnected*lackslogicalsequencinganddevelopment9-7Verypoor:doesnotcommunicate*noorganization*ORnotenoughtoevaluateSophisticatedrangeEffectiveword/idiomchoiceandusageWordformmasteryAppropriateregisterVOCABULARY...