生活需要游戏,但不能游戏人生;生活需要歌舞,但不需醉生梦死;生活需要艺术,但不能投机取巧;生活需要勇气,但不能鲁莽蛮干;生活需要重复,但不能重蹈覆辙。-----无名托福基础写作济南新东方学校托福基础写作主讲教师颜亭祥jnxdftf@126.com一、托福写作概述二、英汉两种语言的区别(一)、美国人与中国人思维方式的不同。linearwayofthinking(二)、英汉句子结构的特点。英语重形和,重结构,汉语重意和,重语义。英语中常用复合句;汉语则常用短句,简单句。10Linkingwordscohesion1.conj.:1)and.but,or,so,while2)if,because,although,That,who,which,what,as---asmorethan,so---that2.inthisreason,inconclusion,forexample3.however,unfortunately,Undeniably4.tomakethingsworse5.generallyspeaking6.同义词7.repetition8.this,it,that,those9.interestingtosee10.whatismore(三)英语多变化variety(diversity),汉语多重复。(四)英语被动句多。汉语中主动句多。---本文来源于网络,仅供参考,勿照抄,如有侵权请联系删除---三、中国学生写作最易犯的十大错误1.Nowadays,collegestudentshouldlearncompetitionandcooperation.2.Theproblemthatiscreatedbycomputersattract(draw,spark,captivate,intrigue,arouse,yield,giveriseto)muchattention.3.Inpresent-daysociety,thereareagreatmanyyoungpeoplegoabroad.4.Inmyopinion,Ithinkthatsmokingshouldbebannedinpublicplaces.5.Thecomputercannotinsteadthepivotalroleplayedbyteachersineducation.6.Somepeoplewelcomeraisingpets,othersholddifferentopinions.7.InlargecitiesofChinahasmanyfastfoodshops.8.Atcollege,weshouldlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossiblesothatwecanbewellpreparedforourfuturecareer.9.Somestudentsareinterestedinplaycomputergames.10.Youreallyhavetwodownsons.四、托福写作25分必备的100个意群词汇持某观点:claim(assert,contendreckondeemsharethebeliefthat)支持某观点:advocate(maintain,welcomevoteforsidewithbeinfavorof)反对某观点:contradict(oppose,objectto,criticize,refutebeagainstcastdoubtsonquestion,challenge)合理的:justified(sensiblefeasibleconvincingholdwaterbearmuchanalysis)好处:advantage(benefit,merit,positive(bright)side,upside,boon,pros,strength)弊端:disadvantage(harm,demerit,negative(dark)side,downside,bane,cons,weaknessdefect,flaw,drawback)肯定:undoubtedly(indeedundeniablythereisnodenyingthat)不确定:belikelyto(potentiallypresumably)重要的:essential(significant,vital,crucial,critical,fundamental,indispensable,---本文来源于网络,仅供参考,勿照抄,如有侵权请联系删除---pivotal)有益的:beneficial(conduciveinstrumental,rewarding)有害的:detrimental(harmfulvirulent)有争议的:controversial(arguable,debatabledisputable,contentious)普遍的:widespread(prevalent,universal,pervasive,ubiquitous)显著地:considerably(significantly,remarkably,Dramatically,tremendously,substantially)明显的:evident(apparent,manifest,crystal-clear)16.增强:enhance(strengthenboost)17.减少:decline(descend,collapse,relieve)18.大约:approximately(nearly,around,estimated,roughly)19.趋势:trend(tendency,inclination)20.预见:predict(expect,project)21.带来bringabout(resultin,leadto)22.引起create(spark;yield;;giveriseto)23.建立establish(found,institute)24.要求callfor(request,demand)25.去除eliminate(remove,eradicate)26.探讨explore(examine,identify)27.描绘depict(portray,illustrate)28.后果consequence(aftermath;outcome)29.足够adequate(enough;sufficient)---本文来源于网络,仅供参考,勿照抄,如有侵权请联系删除---30.解决tackle(resolve,address)31.意识awareness(consciousness)32.控制curb(regula...